Pretty Perfect Memories

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    Pretty Perfect Memories

    Pretty perfect memories

     A trend now forgotten.

    Possibilities persuaded

    By a few moments stolen.

     

    Beauty bathed in intrigue

    A time now misplaced.

    Borrowed beacons

    Carried to another place.

     

    Miracles misted vaguely

    With divine gifted hands .

    Manufactured memoirs

    Stored throughout times sand.

     

    Hearts herald a past

    With arms held open.

    Humbly healing

    On a fresh course chosen.

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    kdarcy commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    11-21-2010

    Saved to my favs, an excellent write, loved all the lines. I read just the last line in each stanza by themselves when I completed the whole read ... awesome, well done k
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    jamie7121f

    11/30/2010

    Thank You! I really enjoyed writing this one. I think it's one of my favs to. Glad you enjoyed it :)

    RPT40 commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-22-2010

    I love the way this reads aloud. This is one of my favorites of yours. Nice write.
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    jamie7121f

    10/22/2010

    Thank you:) It was a fun one. I enjoyed writing it.

    arronpalmer commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-18-2010

    As Olan comments, the structure present in this poem is sublime. From alliteration per stanza, to two-alliterated-word third lines per stanza, to assonance. oh, and the actual content ain't too shabby either! Great piece, nice to see someone doing something a little different. Keep it up!
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    jamie7121f

    10/18/2010

    Thank You : )

    Olan01 commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-17-2010

    I like this alliteration poem with different consonants used for each stanza. This shows that you have a creative mind wanting to expand her poetry skills. Good job. Olan
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    jamie7121f

    10/17/2010

    Thank you :) This came to me while waiting for a bus to pick up some children. I actually had to rush home and write it down. lol

    kkirkwood commented on Pretty Perfect Memories

    10-14-2010

    Memories of my true friend always amaze me when I realized how blessed I am to have them always a part of my life.
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