Prayer

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  • is tending to the little one. think she will be the center of my next poem.

Prayer

    Dear Lord I sit and pray tonight

to bless my family and my sight

watch me, guide me, throughout the next day

and help me not from your word to stray.

For you are the Father, and my best friend

here from the start til the very end

help me hear and carry what I should do

until that one day, when i can walk beside you.

Amen

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Artie commented on Prayer

06-19-2009

This is a very beautiful prayer. If it was written by you, then you truly have an excellent understanding of how important the Lord is to our everyday lives. It's more than stories from a thousand years ago. It's a whole way of thinking, seeing, and dealing with life. Excellent job. 10 from me...

bmoss5

07/06/2009

thanks for the kind words! they meant alot and yes i did write this. i Love the Lord and meant this with all my heart :)

Chrisjan commented on Prayer

05-31-2009

A very well written poem from your heart. Asking God to keep your focus, was an awesome statement ot testimony to share. Thank you.

xxpowersxx commented on Prayer

05-31-2009

Im not a reglious man. Not to say I havent thought about it a lot in the past. This makes me feel like stepping further more towards that area. Very pleasant peom to read. great work.

bmoss5

05/31/2009

its nice to hear that it inspired you to feel that way

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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