Please Listen

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    Please Listen

    A gift of meeting you

    Leaves my mouth speechless

    And heart beating rapidly;

    An endless rhythm.

     

    You are so breathe taking,

    Please don’t walk away with my heart;

    Your beauty stuns me,

    So I pause.

     

    Your charming greeting is a well organized sound;

    I need that precious echo in my ear

    So please say more.

     

    Hello,

    How do you do?

    Your lovely voice asks.

    We’ll,

    I’m fine and dandy

    Just cruising along.

    How are you?

    I responded.

     

    I am astonishing you approached me.

    I have always had a few things to say

    And I know you have some words for me too.

    So will be pleased to loan you my ears.

     

    I just want to start out by say

    I appreciate you taking the time to hear what I had to say.

    I promise I will not keep you long.

     

    Days have pasted

    And I’ve always wished I had you in my life.

    My actions may say otherwise

    Because I have not spoken of this before

    Although we across one another paths.

     

    Your presence lights my fire.

    You’re the one I want you forever.

    I’ve always yearned for your touch,

    Hug and a kiss;

    Just wanting those lips on mine;

    That would be such a great feeling.

     

    It just satisfies me as if received it when I mention such a precious moment.

    Their gentle touch would probably turn me lips to gold.

     

    Happiness is what I seek

    And reflection is what I see in my mirror.

    Visions of laughs,

    Cries, sadness, madness,

    But a deep understanding holds it together.

     

    Hold my hand,

    Feel the passion I speak.

    Trust me,

    It can only become greater with our union.

    I can move forward,

    But why would I, If can’t have you.

     

    Bless me with everlasting cheerfulness;

    I know it’s the job for me.

    I want to understand the weirdest,

    The strangest things that wonders your brain.

    Teach me the skills I lack,

    I will learn the rest,

    And return the lessons to you of me.

     

    Smile, fore it makes me smile,

    Then I always laugh

    Because you’re such a crown jewel.

    Help me capture the moment

     

    Compliment my ego with your quick wittedness;

    Just show off your talents you clever fox!

    Tell me what highlights your day!

    Granted,

    I shall do all that you request.

     

    Hug me,

    Feel our song beat from within;

    Love grips its everyday all day.

    Its beat for you is so lovely;

    Can you feel it reaching out to you?

    That song plays for you continuously

    Because you are all that it understands.

    Arranged only to produce that smile you show now.

     

    The lyrics are self pitched,

    Uncontrollable

    Because it’s spontaneous like you.

     

    Can you understand the words?

    Press your ear to my chest

    And those words shall clearly be understood.

     

    Hold me tighter!

    Never let go!

    Kiss me,

    Overwhelm my lips,

    And make my mind wonder

    What a second kiss will do.

    Make my speech is an echo,

    Make me speechless!

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    AmandaT commented on Please Listen

    09-22-2009

    Nice and Hot....Brilliant!! I appreciate this one. Try, "Tell Me Something" on my page. Good Job.

    MrVividLogic

    09/24/2009

    Please reread this poem.. I edited it to flow better.

    BrielleC commented on Please Listen

    03-08-2009

    This one is nice.. keeps the rhythm and flow!

    MagicRock commented on Please Listen

    03-07-2009

    Wow!... That's hot! H- Town boyz on top!

    bacar10 commented on Please Listen

    03-04-2009

    That was hot! You went Billy D on them. LOL! PEACE!

    rs30501 commented on Please Listen

    02-25-2009

    cool poem;I have to quote it to one of my females sometime...

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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