Please

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    Please

    When?
    When will this war end?
    When will I see my big brother again?
    ...will I ever see him again?
    Thoughts tumble through my mind,
    life without him?

    Impossible.
    When do I want him home?
    That's correct.
    You heard me.
    I'm making demands.
    Send my big brother home.
    RIGHT NOW.



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    sk8ergirl commented on Please

    03-23-2010

    wow i love the poem...... i know what it feels like to have someone you love not there........great write......sk8

    poetic89justiss commented on Please

    03-01-2009

    i can tell u are passionate about this. you should rewrite it. make it longer. go deeper. describe your pain to me. keep going. i like

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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