Philosophy

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    Philosophy

    Can you feel it in the air?
    That taste of completion?
    Can you feel it?
    I bet you can't
    Most people never do.
    To say I'm completed is a bold faced lie
    To be completed is my goal in life.
    We must find our dream and stick with it
    No matter how incomprehensible.
    Many will laugh
    at your foolish attempt to be completed
    But I say be a fool if you must
    Dare to be stupid if you have to
    But never be discouraged
    If your dream is deffered
    (As the old poem goes)
    Continue to hold onto it in your heart.
    Deffered means delayed
    not destroyed
    As if you can never be completed
    No find a way
    and if you must take the untreaded path
    Take it.
    Life is full of them its unavoidable.
    To the people who read this.
    Find your dream
    It doesn't have to be anything particular
    but focus on it more the same.
    Stay on it because you're a fool
    once you do.
    Fools keep attempting to complete themselves
    never giving up
    and always achieving the pinnacle of their sub conscious
    Completing their dream
    And
    Completing themselves

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    Tempestlady commented on Philosophy

    06-20-2009

    Should put it in inspirational, very motivational also. I lose the meter at the end, but love the heart and content, especially the message. Write on...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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