Perfect

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    As I saw my prince walk down the hallway I smiled as I mustered up the courage to talk to him. He looked up, straight at me and I began to walk over to the angel standing right before my eyes. Only to have the scenery shaded by the perfect head of his perfect ex-girlfriend. She walked up and kissed him right before my eyes as if I weren't even there.
    Crushed, I walked right passed them tears blinding my eyes. By the next passing period I was filled with anger at myself for being such a coward. As I opened my locker I looked at my secret picture of my dear prince and I smiled. I walked down the hallways looking for him, and was passed up by his ex-girlfriend. She looked at me and whispered the word loser to her bestfriend. As they laughed I lost all will to hold back. I pushed right through the crowd of peole went right up to her and punched her in her perfect face right in the middle of her perfect nose. I walked out the school doors hearing yelps of pains and laughed as tears streamed down my face. 'What was the point of beating the girl and not get the guy?" I asked myself . But as I walked up to my bus stop there he was. We stared at each other for a while and then he walked up to me and looked at me with the same eyes I dreamed of at night.He kissed me with the same lips I longed to taste. He asked " Was that a good enough confeession?" I look up at him and all I could say was "Perfect."

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    stephainecox commented on Perfect

    10-26-2009

    I loved your poem can you email me at coz.danielle24@yahoo.com and i will send you some of my poems.

    sincere commented on Perfect

    05-29-2009

    Ok girl, I feel you, lol. Not exactly a poem but ur head is in the right place. You have come a long way, and you still have a long way to go. Keep writing, it soothes the soul.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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