paradise

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paradise

     I feel the warm air breeze past my face as though my life has just begun
     I sit upon the sun heated sand thinking of what I have become
     If you have somthing amazing but have no one to share it
     Its like my thoughts are crashing waves or an unguided spirit
     You think about the one place you can go to excape it all
     But once your in reallity people can only see your success fall
     Paradise is what they call this unbelievable magical place 
     Where the people judge your personality and not what they see on your face
     To think that there such a place where evreything goes your way
     There is no paradise so just live your life today

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mamasan commented on paradise

12-05-2009

No there is no paradise where everything is perfect but you possess something no one can take from you. What is that? Why it is you and I know that from your ability to write words that make sense. You are young and that is good because the world is like a clamshell....just keep opening until you become a pearl. Congratulations, keep writing.

MsKrystle commented on paradise

06-06-2009

WOW I think that's true, there is no paradise. Some people think heaven is paradise but there's no one alive to tell us so. I believe everyday is a gift (that's why its called the present...yeah yeah). But honestly I do try to cherish these moments. Nice work

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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