Pandora's Box

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  • Angst

    Pandora's Box
    You came and lit the spark
    The flame burned deep within my soul
    You made me feel alive again
    You made me feel wanted and loved

    Now you are gone

    The flame has died

    My love is ready to be enclosed

    A box awaits

    Close the lid

    Let it stay shut forever

    My love for you

    Safe

    Secure

    Mine

    Buried deep where no-one can see

    Or touch

    Or take away

    My box

    No key.

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    origionalmerlin commented on Pandora's Box

    04-23-2009

    " I read, pause and mourn, inspired by knowledge , disquieted from expearience, and pray that by some adventure learn to love more.. andrew
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    laurijcris commented on Pandora's Box

    04-22-2009

    WOW! Your poem is intense! Something about no key bothered me. I took it as almost you were shut down forever and that makes the poem really sad. I think I would like it better with My box being the last words--Just my oponion. Keep writing!
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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