PAIN

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    Just trying to get over one of the most difficult breakups in ma life...its just a thought so i decided to put it together

    PAIN

     This is just a thought
    This is just a feeling
    This I dont know how to say
    But, i hurt more than You can imagen.

    Hurts deeply in ma soul
    Hurts where i care the most
    Hurts hurts but i cant move on
    Hurts what do I do?

    My hearst cries Your name
    My heart is disappointed
    My heart longs for the truth
    My heart I exposed to you.

    Its broken
    Its distroyed
    Its chattered
    Its confused

    I dont know why but i still want you
    I dont know why but I wanna be with you
    I dont know you but am waiting for you
    But until then, I pray my heat is heal and ready to forgive    .

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    ansari commented on PAIN

    07-16-2010

    Yes for the one you love you're prepared to forgive, forget and reconcile. that's how the world goes around.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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