PAIN

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God rest your soul mom i love and miss you dearly. One day after life i will be with you. This i know is true.

PAIN

Back in 1984 my mom was blessed with me. Another son of her own a son to be. I went trough life loving her so. Never knowing one day she must go. I thought she would always always be here. In 2006 i had to face my fears. My joy,my friend,my everything was gone. I look to the sky to tell god he's wrong. This was not the time to take her yet. He had done this with no threat. I have begged and pleaded to get her back. Not realizing just one fact. One day i will be at those gate's touching her hand. Living in eternal life and that is grand. Time has gone and i still have this thought. I have lost this war that i faught. There is alot i have learned and alot i've gained. My love,my life,my mother she has no more pain.

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saskiab1971 commented on PAIN

02-20-2010

This is another great poem!!! Capitalize God and break up the paragraph into lines if you can :)

kimmie862004 commented on PAIN

02-15-2010

Baby that is so touching...and it hits home to me too....u are just so extremely talented, its amazing!!!

btt313 commented on PAIN

02-15-2010

thats a good one! i miss and love her too.she was the best mom ever!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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