Orgasmic

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    Orgasmic

    Orgasmic

    Existence without love leaves you in despair.
    Trust in someone to take your heart, wanting only never to part.
    Leaving nothing, but true impressions on my mind.
    Please, please be very kind.
    My heart is fragile: it has been trampled, too many times to count.
    Don’t ever doubt my love for you, because I will endlessly be faithful.
    And try not to do anything you wouldn’t want me to.
    Searching, discovering, and in no way uncovering, the real you.
    You control your emotions; kind of feels like you’re sweating my fidelity.
    Never the less I try to impress you, undress you caress you.
    Wanting continually to molest you, not only for your body, but your mind!
    Show me a sign and I may drop you that line and give you a little of my time…
    Let you visualize my thoughts, with all their knots.
    Continuously binding, burning, flying so fast sometimes I can’t keep up.
    Never have I wanted to be so close to you, as I feel you are to me.
    I have changed my perspective and even though times get hectic, we live life and deal with all the frustrations, by sharing our masturbations.
    Loving the taste, smell, or sound of you.
    Yearning to constantly fuck you and suck you.
    Kiss all those soft erogenous zones.
    Never leaving that beautiful cock feeling alone.
    Hearing you moan, makes me want to loan…
    Myself to you to do as you do, make me cum.
    A little hum from your lips on mine, you know what I mean.
    The ones that wait to take you in: if only for just one more sin.
    Share with me this fantasy: now give your hand to me.
    Take me on your moonlit ride: I’ll be right there by your side.

    Patricia R. Leebert
    11/15/08

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    highestbidder commented on Orgasmic

    10-14-2009

    great structure. great build up. perfect name!! Your writing make me wonder else you have to offer. My bday is sept 24th what's yours??

    Deckard commented on Orgasmic

    06-28-2009

    very intense to say the least and the ryhming was very strong! you pull no punches and though you get very graphic towards the end, you have set it up with great intensity in the beginning.

    ianraiseland commented on Orgasmic

    06-12-2009

    . . .brb. . . . .k, im good now. seriously tho, i love it. the imagery if great. this is an inperational piece for thos who value the same passionate outlook, and for thos who wish simply to live vycariously. to bare ones heart and soul in this way shows true character and open mindedness as-well-as honesty.

    dahlusion commented on Orgasmic

    05-13-2009

    An absolute warm, wet ride through all of my erogenous zones: "Never leaving that beautiful cock feeling alone. Hearing you moan, makes me want to loan… myself to you to do as you do, make me cum" Mmmmmm. My pants are now unzipped.

    lonewolf commented on Orgasmic

    04-26-2009

    very erotic!! you have one lucky man.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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