One True Love's

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    One True Love's

    My one true love has shown me my fate.
    The one man I love is the same man I hate.
    From across the room he holds my heart in the palm of his hands;
    But still he twists it and turns it just because he can.
    I wanna cry out to make him understand how I feel and how truely defeated I am.
    I want everyone to know that this really, really sucks; because, he's my best friend and doesn't even give a fuck.

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    origionalmerlin commented on One True Love's

    04-06-2009

    you cant make a silk purse out of a pigs ear...(try a cattle prod.. (seriously good poem keep up the writing

    xxlheart commented on One True Love's

    03-16-2009

    love the rawness of this piece. and yes i gave it a ten because it is original and captures the artist to her heart and mind. btw, true love loves you unselfishly. one sided love screws you over. sincerely.me

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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