Old Man's Lap

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    Old Man's Lap

    "I'm gettin' old," he'd say
    but to me, he was young
    so young, his face told a tale
    of trials and tears
    and raw love breakin'
    all the rules.

    So young, I could taste him
    on the tip of my tongue
    when he kissed me
    and curled his fingers
    in my hair
    like an autumn rake
    through sweet messy hay
    all rumpled and strewn about
    from a romp on his lap
    and hot moist air in his ear.

    "Yeah, I'm just an old man,"
    he'd say, 'cause he knew
    I'd have to prove him wrong
    one more day.

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    devaamido commented on Old Man's Lap

    09-20-2009

    This poem is SO HOT!! You do this genre better than anybody else on this site. You really do know how to light up an old man's life... & artistically too!

    JimMagill commented on Old Man's Lap

    07-04-2009

    This is a very nice, and well thought out, poem! I am glad that I had the chance to read this poem and comment on it. ---JimMagill

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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