Night
Dark flashes quiet my mindHe moves
Thirst overwhelming
Sweet seduction, erotically slow
Over the blood rush, contented
Two souls bound in images beyond time, sighs in unison
Daylight overcomes too soon
Breaking the spell
Night
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Tags: Fantasy
He moves
Thirst overwhelming
Sweet seduction, erotically slow
Over the blood rush, contented
Two souls bound in images beyond time, sighs in unison
Daylight overcomes too soon
Breaking the spell
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Beautiful1974 commented on Night
08-19-2009
- Wonderfully said- and perfectly understood. I was able to form a delicious picture myself from your poem.
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yvettelove commented on Night
07-14-2009
- this is a very interesting poem i enjoyed reading it
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