NIGHT

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    NIGHT

    The night as black as an orientals hair, you are not alone but in despare, the moon as bright as the glistened sun,, the day shift is over your job is done,,, the night is fine the breeze is cool, a perfect night to break a rule. This night is not for uno but for dose, a night so black for lovers who want to get close. All the bad things and boring things tonight we'll disregard just think about something good it wont be hardd,,, the night should be fulfilling and creative learn how to be happy learn how to live,,, just go out and relax in the haze sort through your problems like going through a maze,,,most friends i know would rather have the light,,,,but me myself,, i like the night!!!

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    litilraven commented on NIGHT

    11-20-2008

    Your poem has some really good rhyme girl!! Your meter is a bit out of whack, and that makes it hard to read....what kept me reading was the story your poem was about. If you could get the meter in line that poem would be a killer poem all the way!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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