neddles in my veins

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neddles in my veins

minds drifting further and farther away in time
losiing to many nights and lost to many days
the worlds a shady cloudy gray
this distorted reality has become to familar
uncomfortable dismay
neddles tear into my veins an old familar pain
wishing tomarrow go away
sun rises , sun sets another day
chemichcal delusions setting in
struggling somewher with in
sleep deprived illusions cloud my thinking
time evre so slowly ticking
cluttered thought go on and on
a chaotic confusions
this destructive reality continues to presist
sanity no longer exsist
neddled tear into my veins an old familar pain
INSANE
 looking back a 1000 eyes and every one's pointed at me 
forgetting to breathe
parinoia, consprisys all around
meth i have become submitted and bound
voice has no sound
not letting go ttill i hit the ground
neddles tear into my veins an old familar pain

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FindingJune commented on neddles in my veins

06-25-2009

I have to say...spell check, spell check, spell check. The misspelling were quite distracting from the work.

kArAZYGIRL

06/25/2009

the mis spelling was the in my oppinion what ever i want it to be in my eyes it was BEAUTIFUL besides artistic exprssion is NOT PERFECT

KZ3 commented on neddles in my veins

06-18-2009

THIS SOUND LIKE A BEAUTIFUL CRY FOR HELP GREA USE OF NON-RHYME POETRY

bforibus commented on neddles in my veins

06-18-2009

im not sure if the misspelling in teh beginning was the euphoria or accidental but it added a beautiful touch to the emotion and the rhythm of this poem. great job.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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