My War

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My War

Silence

An unspoken woe

Fear

The common belief

 

Dark twilight

Looking to the life

Our lost self

Fading into red

 

A luminary

The signal

When it has begun

None have lived

 

Forgive all the sins

Once was there

Now been sent to hell

The Devil grins

 

Where was I

What could he have done

Oh my God

You are my excuse

 

Hate

The unknown passion

Life

The yearning for you

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WinterFrost commented on My War

10-09-2009

Flow? There is no flow Each line is it's own nail into a coffin As you hammer them home That is not a bad thing

Rygar commented on My War

10-08-2009

hero, you are a creator of visions, a master of dreams, words flow with ease, to paint wondrous scenes. nicely done!

SuperChick76 commented on My War

10-08-2009

Wow, I liked the hard flow of it. Nicely put together. Very nice. I liked it a lot. Especially the beginning.

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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