My Own Prisoner

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  • Confusion
    • lilvicki
    • Visually seen as my mind wants it to appear!!

    My Own Prisoner

    Captured in the dark, no light in sight
    Prisoner of your own life
    No key to be found as a treasure chest
    Can’t see or hear or even breath
    Untold teardrops running down
    Invisible as your unspoken soul
    Broken as your heart of gold
    Confusion running through your mind
    Everyday in and out of time
    Drowning in a sea of shame
    That can not seem to go away
    Wondering about love or faith
    Shouting out loud will I ever be alive
    Will I ever be heard or seen for me
    I am running out of breath
    As this shame consumes of me
    Will I ever break away as I try to escape
    This lie of mine
    Time let it be told and unravel
    My soul
    That one who holds the key
    Come forth
    Then free I shall be
    Can’t you see or hear me
    Love is my heart and faith stays in
    My soul

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    Chrisjan commented on My Own Prisoner

    05-30-2009

    You are very creative on how your words transcend to the images that have formed, this awesome poem ! Thanks for sharing.

    lilvicki

    05/30/2009

    Thkns alot for yr feedback, im glad you enjoyed reading my poemss

    ADeVarro commented on My Own Prisoner

    03-30-2009

    I really liked this. Its all confusing yet visually very clear. Take care!

    lilvicki

    05/30/2009

    Ya, it is, thanks, glad you like it!!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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