My Monster

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My Monster

It is finished
I am no more
I will never be
I never was before
I finally stopped the pain
It was happening again
I couldn't stand the hurt
I wanted it to end
Bring hurt to the flesh
To kill pain in the soul
Death is the result
When hurt and pain become a whole
I bled too much
My heart stopped it's beat
I hurt no more
My task is complete
I pushed her too far
This monster in me
She gave me a warning
But I wanted to be free
I didn't want to live
To no longer exist
This monster called love
Just longed to be kissed
So this monster in me
I kissed her good bye
We embraced till the end
Me and the monster called life

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darkneverfades commented on My Monster

05-19-2009

wow i really like that i can relate your a very great writer

TheAngelOfDeath commented on My Monster

02-12-2009

i really like this poem you need to check out my stuff i think youll like it.

JEAGLEFEATHER commented on My Monster

01-03-2009

This monster called life; great line! when the monster is life itself ending life is the end of our monster. I like that. Your poem inspires me to write more. Dark poetry is so refreshing. I tire of love poems and relish in the dark

fallenknight commented on My Monster

12-28-2008

chillingly familiar...I can identify with you through this poem as I struggle daily with my own demons...

beautifuldeath commented on My Monster

12-16-2008

very sad.

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