my love is as deep as the ocean

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    • prettykitty
    • Lovin' and enjoyin' every min. of Life, cuz we are never promised tommorrow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    my love is as deep as the ocean

    my love is as deep as the ocean
    my love is as brite as the sun
    my love has no bounds
    it's as constant as the stars above
    i love you for who you are, not what u will be someday
    my love is like a blooming rose
    it's very small, but as time goes by it slowly grows
    when my love has reached it's full bloom
    it's beauty and glory will shine for all to see
    and everyone will know that you are loved, with so much passion
    that they too will be envious of our love
    you mean the world to me and i want
    the whole world to see

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    boomboom56 commented on my love is as deep as the ocean

    09-17-2009

    I am already envious from just reading your words. The desire and devotion you express is strong. You should not stop writing from your heart and soul. Beautiful stuff.

    Grito commented on my love is as deep as the ocean

    03-23-2009

    Written precisely and very positively!!!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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