My Life

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    My Life

    I will, I will they say
    Or even after a while
    It's not like I'm asking them to walk a mile


    I promise or ok
    Just wait and I will
    Here I am waiting while they stand still


    Do this and that
    Please, please, please
    It's like I have a life long disease


    They don't even care
    Take this and that it's only her dream
    It always lowers her self-esteem


    Will it ever end
    Can I have back my life
    Please help me so I can throw out the strife

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    Sx9 commented on My Life

    12-16-2009

    bitter vibes expression of the inner most feel for life,,nice vibes,,well put short and hits..

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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