My Gift

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I wrote this to my boyfriend. He is an attorney, hence the line about the 'man of law.'

My Gift

Dear God, universe, or fate...
I am writing a note of endless thanks and forever gratitude.
Could I really be looking at my soul mate?

My path has crossed with an extraordinary being.
For I have stumbled upon a tangible angel.
With his every move he creates an undiscovered feeling.

He absorbes me so completely, 'till my very last breath.
His smooth tone music to my ears.
I hold his warm life against my chest.

Stirring up my neglected passionate soul, I yearn for more.
Pulling at my delighted heart strings, I let go and let my spirit soar.

I cannot help but freely expose all of me.
What an ingenious blend of charisma and charm.
I feel ignited and fresh, despite how tattered I may be.

Responding with meaning opinion to all.
He spreads his infectious outlook to all he meets.
Chivalry pours out of this man of law.

I am so honored to have met such a treasure.
I literally have been touched by an angel.
Sincerely, with hope... may this moment last forever.

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Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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