my friend the poe'

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I revised this hope it has some response
 cheers

my friend the poe'

                                 I wri'e , 
                                    ha' off 
                              to get i' off my chest 
                    And I gesticula'e glo'al stops
                                                       to expose nuances
                        between wri'en border- lines 
                 my friend and cri'ic
                                 avid reader
                             wills wri'in on                           
                                and in'ermi'an'ly
                                   my poetry
                                     ge's(oops)
                                        its 
                                        't'

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ginga commented on my friend the poe'

07-02-2009

Clever , creative, and a fresh way to play with and not let us forget "cross" an invisible "T" Ginga

davidcircle

07/03/2009

llalalalalal thankyouf

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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