My First Love

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  • Lost Love

    My First Love
    Time was our enemy
    Because if everything stayed the same
    You would still be with me
    So as I overcome the heartache
    And learn from my mistakes
    I think of you and what we could have been
    If we would have stayed together way back then
    But as I put the pieces of the puzzle together
    I know my memories of you will last forever
    Because you were more to me than just a girl I knew
    In reality you were my dream come true
    You made me feel things I never felt
    And helped me discover deep thoughts within myself.

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    missval commented on My First Love

    03-10-2009

    you started running from the gate and it is solid feels like you had so much more I feel you
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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