My Enchanting Vixxen

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    My Enchanting Vixxen

    My Enchanting Vixxen

     She came from deep within the wood,
        Mistral,
             smoky,            
                  vaporous.
    Beckoned me, but dare I should,
    To follow on her gliding course.

    Her countenance eluded me,
    I wasn’t sure ‘twas substance, real.
    Was it only fog among the trees?
        Or surreal
             illusion,
                   ethereal.

     I followed on, unable to stop,

                                        or unwilling.
    My mind captured by this vision,
    My feet given freedom and direction
    By the same force that had
          my mind
                  imprisoned.

    Then all at once within the glade,
    She stood before me, crystal clear,
    Her hair a glowing bright cascade
    Caressing shoulders,
          ghostly,
                 sheer.
    Her eyes held mine in frozen stare
    Yet burned with blazing passion,
    She seemed so burdened with despair
    Yet filled with deep compassion.

    And as she slowly came toward me,
    She reached with outstretched hand
    And gently pulled me close to see
    The pain she could not stand.

    And like the Prophet, understood
    That pain is but the fire,
    That burns the vessels’ bowl of wood
    That’s filled with joy’s desire.

    Within her hands she held my face
    And smiled with lips so sweet,
    Then kissed me with such gentle grace
    Surrender was complete.

    My mind, my heart, my total being
    Was owned by her that night,
    And like a dream, the moment fleeting,
    My Vixxen soon took flight.

    At times, in hope, I’ll walk that wood,
    And ponder that occasion,
    And wish that once more, if I could,
           To meet
                 My Enchanting
                                   Vixxen.

     N.F. Biron  11/2000

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    am2anangel commented on My Enchanting Vixxen

    10-21-2009

    Very well written a true fantasy brought to life. Your style and flow were well rounded by your word choice. Great job.

    1990lh commented on My Enchanting Vixxen

    10-04-2009

    that was beautiful very mystifying, passionated, and vivid great job excellent write

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