My Dear Brother

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I hope ye'll like this, fremented in me head for a bloomin' month.

My Dear Brother

We don't agree on everything, we don't always get along,
But if you thing it means a thing, you couldn't be more wrong,
I know I gave you trouble, I know I gave you grief,
But I'd like to think you enjoyed my company, no matter how brief,

Everytime I needed you, I would look around,
No matter how much time had passed, I knew where you'd be found,
Always right behind me, keeping me from falling back,
Helping me to not trip, when my balance I did lack,

Never there as an obstacle, but rather as a goal,
To reach and to surpass you, is what I strive for from the soul,
Yet it's a friendly competition, one I'm sure someday I'll win,
I can't give up my dream now, I feel it would be a sin,

So I will carry on now, keeping you in my heart and mind,
Look here and I hope you'll find,
The truth that has been hidden, for oh so many years,
You are one of the few, who my heart holds very dear.

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thecross commented on My Dear Brother

01-18-2011

A brothers love is unique in so many endearing and splendid vibrant ways, nicely written

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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