My dad .

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Sadness
  • ,
  • Anger

    My dad .

    Most times when you say you'll be there,

    I wonder where there is.

    I know it's not beside me,

     because there your always missed.

    You tell me I don't upset you,

    and that your very proud;

    proud of what dad?

    You have always been apart of another crowd.

    You hardly even know me,

    you barely know my life.

    I dont understand, for two completely

    different people, everyone says were just alike.

    But I am nothing like you,

    I'm sensitive and I care,

    for the ones who are around me

    even the ones I can not bare.

    You still treat me like a child,

    I'm far to grown up for that,

    I hate it on fathers day because

    I can't say world's greatest dad.

    You've never been there for me,

    you have never seen me cry

    but you were supposed to be there dad,

    I guess it was nothing but a lie.

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    icu2 commented on My dad .

    02-19-2010

    The dad's today are quite a mess. You sound like you have it together though. Hang in there sweetheart. Make sure you don't fall for someone like him...more of the same...you know? You are a very good writer, you express yourself wonderfully.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    randabear09’s Poems (2)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    i lost you 2
    My dad . 1