My Cabin

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    My Cabin





    High upon a mountain top,
    Where wind and snow are rare to stop.
    Lies a cabin in the pine.
    'Tis not much yet much is mine
    A place to bury all my woes,
    Far beneath the mountain snows.
    With time and space to be alone.
    My board my bed my hearth my home.
    Oh, my cabin in the pine,
    'Tis not much yet much is mine.
    High upon this mountain top,
    Where wind and snow are rare to stop.

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    dahlusion commented on My Cabin

    02-25-2009

    Perfect rhymes, and I am envious, I want a cabin.

    Maggiethegood

    06/06/2009

    Yes, everyone who writes needs that perfect little place of peace ans solitude, like...My Cabin. Thanks for your remarks. ~M~

    Olorin commented on My Cabin

    02-21-2009

    I like this Maggie - a bit Tolkienesque somehow. Reminds me of references to the shelter provided by the wayward pine (in books by Terry Goodkind) - a cosy place in the midst of a wilderness! See you anon. OLLY xo

    Maggiethegood

    06/06/2009

    Thank you so very much for your kind words. XOXOx...~M~

    TerryDay commented on My Cabin

    02-20-2009

    I don't like repeating the top two lines at the bottom.

    Maggiethegood

    06/06/2009

    Well, I think that the repetition of the first line ends it quite nicely. Reminding the reader that one can love a tiny place of their very own.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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