Moving On

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Moving On

You were their for me,

through every little thing,

but truthfully deep down,

it really did sting.

I really dont want,

to be with you any more,

not just because you've called me a whore.

There are more reasons,

than you really know,

that I put this on,

like it was some kind of show.

I need to move on,

I dont love you any more,

this relationship is done,

im not taking the blame no more.

I did love you,

at one point and time,

but you fucked me over,

for the last damn time.

The point of this poem,

is that im moving on,

im done with this shit,

that you have been putting on.

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LadyL714 commented on Moving On

02-01-2010

I liked this poem because your feelings were definitely shown in a very poetic way. Good job!

viny commented on Moving On

07-09-2009

To the point, done is done. Nice flow to the message.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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