MOON
I lay here and wonder whatThe moon thinks looking down on us,
All the strife and war and hate,
Society served upon a plate,
Or is it mindless to what goes on,
And bows it's head with each new dawn?
Chad Atwell
MOON
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The moon thinks looking down on us,
All the strife and war and hate,
Society served upon a plate,
Or is it mindless to what goes on,
And bows it's head with each new dawn?
Chad Atwell
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justastar2 commented on MOON
06-07-2009
- Beautifully written with great imagery and flow. You bring up good questions and emotions. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
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