mistake

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mistake

Look into my deep brown eyes,
and don't be surprised if you
realize I seen through all your lies.
When you kiss these sexy luscious lips
or place your hands upon my thick caramel hips,
don't be surprise if I don't respond
like all the other times.
You lied and cheated
and baby please believe I feel totally defeated.
What we had you mistreated and left me superheated.
Yet, I can't hate because the intimacy
between us was once great.
It's just a little to late
for you to state it was a SIMPLE
mistake.

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Nohea517 commented on mistake

08-25-2009

I can really relate to this poem. I could also feel the anger coming through. Very well written.

Tshon

08/30/2009

Thank You!

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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