Mindless

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Confusion

    Mindless

    Now and then I've tried to hide
    my precious self
    under beds when it's late at night.
    All i can do is watch your spit
    dissolve my sand castle
    I so carefully built.
    I have tried to hear all that you've seen
    all that I was, am and will be.
    Now and then, It's all In my head.
    So now comes the time
    to pull all the plugs
    and hit rewind
    I know that your more than you show
    I show you more than I am
    Now and then its all in my head
    Sometimes 5+5 don't equal ten.

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Sopradiction commented on Mindless

    05-16-2009

    Ahh- very open to skepticism- i like the sense of falsity in this write... and the imagery of trying to find truth if i understood correctly-uniquely well written i must say...

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    Lather’s Poems (2)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Church St. -1
    Mindless 1