Meeting a girl’s father

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    Meeting a girl’s father

    As I sit here in her living room

    Meeting her father for the very first time

     

    I’m trying to find the right thing to say to her very protective daddy

    I wonder what I should do

     

    Should I stay here terrified tapping the floor with my black shiny shoe?

    Or should I get up and leave

     

    But it was too late

    As he entered the room it felt like I was in the mist of doom

    All I could hear and feel is my heart beating tremendously fast

     

    When he began to speak as he approached me

    His powerful voice was somewhat like a punch

    It knocked me right off my feet

     

    So all that I could do after that is get up and run

    Just like the release of my body liquid was running down my pants leg

     

    And as I pulled my man hood back together

    I realized that the feeling of meeting a girl’s father for the first time is not at all fun.

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    cousinsoren commented on Meeting a girl’s father

    03-13-2010

    Hey, I love the clean ,easy style of this narrative poem. The humour is veiled, but a reader can easily identify with the entire story line of this immaculately crafted piece. I had to meet a future mother- in-law. ........LOL "man hood" should be written........"manhood". Cosmetics and rhythm would have improved with punctuation. Overall, this is masterly composed narrative piiece...a pleasure to read with a smile and a chuckle. My rating is 10+
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    almonord1990

    06/18/2010

    thank you very much

    Pisces00 commented on Meeting a girl’s father

    01-06-2010

    Oh yeah I can defiently relate to that.... As far as I see it, when you present yourself in a genuine fashion, flaws and imperfections in clear view, they can at least admire you for keeping your image down to the letter. But very nice
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    almonord1990

    01/09/2010

    Thank you and remember to pass my SN on to other people so they can read read and i will do the same for u.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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