Man has changed

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Man has changed

From Adam and Eve's days
UNTIL now
Nothing has changed
Sky
Sun
Moon
Stars
Ocean
etc.....
Nothing changed but....
Human only changed....
Saw birds flying
Invented aeroplanes
By speearing fishes
Designed speedy boats
On hearing echoes
Invented radio but.....
WHAT he found to
Divide us RELIGIOUSLY

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Chaos128 commented on Man has changed

08-04-2010

Your question is a legitimate one, but your first examples are of things of the material world that can be distinguished by their specific properties. Religion/faith is a spiritual concept that can’t be measured or defined in specific terms, therefore people see it differently and the disagreements over who’s right, too often become violent. But you’ve posed a very valid question in a fine composition. Good work.

sherry122 commented on Man has changed

07-09-2009

Everything also changes with man, the sky looks different then it looked this morning:). It‘s a pity that we’re divided even though there’s only one god we all worship.

msfaithone commented on Man has changed

05-22-2009

Your words contain truth, yet something is missing for me. They don't manage to connect spirit and truth. When words are able to resonate inside they attain a power that breathes life into them.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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