Magnificent Dream,

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    Magnificent Dream,

    As each one's dream comes true so dose each one's
    heart shatter.

    What suddenly became an romantic dream.

    Taking this flower purely from my enchanted heart , which I
    cherish deeply.

    With out a doubt caring just not enough.

    As one has all this love to give , there's no one there to receive on the other end.

    Each nightfall so lonely awaiting to show all I have to give.

    As having the most interment caress .

    Lying alone dreaming of every moment softly holding some one .

    As one wishes to have one to tell there inter most secrets .

    Awaiting to be there long life dream.

    Many sleepless nights so wonderfuly scarce with out ,
    your warm soft embrace.

    Your body to touch purely into your magnificent soul.

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    Chaos128 commented on Magnificent Dream,

    07-31-2009

    A wistful, thoughtful expression of longing that’s more reflective than melancholy. I’m constantly amazed by the depth of emotion on this site, and just when I think I’ve gotten used to it, I run into a work like “Magnificent Dream”. Nice one!

    PRober commented on Magnificent Dream,

    07-09-2009

    a wonderfully romantic dream and poem... well done, keep writing from the heart!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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