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M

 I think thee unatenable
 O fowl will - o - wisp
 Through my mind floats
 Draws me through that bog
 To tregg the sludge-mudge of thought
 I follow thee , shade


 In life I watch thee from afar
 Near on the opposite shore I sit
 To neverous to call forth , to speak
 Over the roar of tempest fouled sea
 Though , could cross with half step
 From my sight you go
 From my thoughts , never


 In fair dream
 There I stand on shore I opposed sit
 Hand in hand
 Their I see we stand
 In my mind
 Done with full thinking only


 Loneliness of the moon
 Crowed with many friendly star
 I see you as unatenable as solar love
 Like the moon fain to kiss the sun
 In love gives ever languish chase
 Fail to kiss loves burning lips


 To the girl I can't get out of my head
 There I will keep thee
 For it be the only way
 I can have thee
 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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