loving you is killing me

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    loving you is killing me

    Darling, you tear me up

    Blow my mind and knock me down

    Then leave me behind

    All alone to drown




    You'll walk away again

    And I'll lay down to die

    Then you'll come back

    And pretend we never said goodbye




    You'll kiss me

    And draw the life from my lips

    I won't fight back

    When you pull at my hips




    I feel you

    Rushing through my veins

    You're in each breath

    My body drains




    Pulling my heartstrings

    Stealing all my breath

    Loving you like this

    Is the closest I've been to death




    Maybe this need for you

    Will get me killed

    But for what it's worth

    I'll love you still

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    charmlessman2d commented on loving you is killing me

    09-10-2011

    love the 4x4. 4 lines, 4 stanzas. packed with a punch. hard hitting, coincidentally enough, like a Hacksaw Jim Dugan 4x4. great job! keep writing.

    francis4864 commented on loving you is killing me

    05-09-2009

    That's my poem.

    randy commented on loving you is killing me

    03-17-2009

    YOU GOT IT BAD FIND A NEW ONE

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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