Love Unseen

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    Love Unseen

    In wooden glades of mossy green
    with barren feet she ran between.
    Sensing call that touched her heart
    to follow paths this voice did chart.

    Of whom it came, and who was he,
    that moved her from her home to flee;
    this answer she did not contain,
    but the strength of it, it did not wane.

    Standing now within that heather glenn,
    his sense of presence she felt again.
    Spirit being, his form so undefined,
    His words of love, heard in her mind.

    They danced within his spirit realm
    not confined to mortal sight.
    No need to touch of fleshly hands,
    their spirits strongly woven tight.

    And as the sun did start to rise,
    tears of sadness filled her eyes.
    For once again she must let him go,
    his presence lost-- in day's new glow.

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    thecross commented on Love Unseen

    04-12-2010

    Great imagery used and a nice selection of words, good write.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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