LOVE IN DOUBT

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    LOVE IN DOUBT

    Clear my mind, love in doubt.
    Take the time to sort it out.
    My heart was there for you to steal.
    But is it real, Just tell me what the hells the deal.

    Are you serious, Are you clear ?
    Or will you make me cry my last tear.
    Love in doubt, I taste the fear.

    No more chances for the lies you told.
    My love for you now runs cold.
    It took so much out of me to see what your're all about.
    Now i'm taking back my love in doubt.

    I'll be just fine and will rise above it all.
    The past is gone, It's behind my wall.


    (dedicated to my ex-husband)


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    unspoken commented on LOVE IN DOUBT

    04-10-2009

    sounds like something I would have wrote for my ex wife. Nice work

    CdeM commented on LOVE IN DOUBT

    03-25-2009

    Emotionally intact, I would like to se your obviously angry expression better portrayed; leaving out some of the simpler rhyme schemes... Still well done...

    carollynn1964 commented on LOVE IN DOUBT

    03-11-2009

    I wasn't aware that you knew my ex. LOL Good Job!

    dahlusion commented on LOVE IN DOUBT

    03-04-2009

    "No more chances for the lies you told. My love for you now runs cold" —— the honesty here to yourself and him will set you free. Powerful poem!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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