lost

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    lost

    I am so lost,
    so very lost,
    only you can save me,
    where have you been.

    you left me lying on the floor,
    shattered, in bits and pieces,
    thrown across the floor,
    uncared for.

    where have you been,
    I lay here,
    used without meaning,
    taken for granted.

    not any more,
    I will leave this haunted place,
    piking up the pieces as I go,
    never looking back.

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    madkracker696 commented on lost

    08-28-2009

    This one caught me by surprise! 0.0' This has the air of being abandoned and hoping and praying to be rescued from the agony...I'm so happy I found this site...:)

    Laurief2009 commented on lost

    06-22-2009

    Good poem. It reminds me of a song I once heard. Be careful not to copy. It has a lot of meaning though. Keep writing.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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