Lost

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    Lost

    I am a lonely child in the night
    Finding my way to the light
    Do my eyes decive me,as i walk and stair
    Walking forever and ever
    Can you not hear my heart
    Beating faster and faster as we part
    As i walk and you run
    Faster and faster to the rhythm of the beating drum
    Can we never meet and you not feel my pain
    Do my eyes leak as if it was a pool of rain
    So helpless,so lost,a child of the night
    Just hoping to find the light

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    TheMastersPen commented on Lost

    02-02-2009

    Dear one, there is no doubt you have talent, but in order for you to reach that next level, you must do certain things...like check spelling before you submit. There are many free things online like this. If you aspire to be published someday, a si

    MizKiszes69

    08/21/2009

    thanks 4 the info

    contraban commented on Lost

    01-29-2009

    I can definitely relate. Beautiful.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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