~lost soul~

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    most of my poems are rooted from my personal veiws but sometime i write something that i can imagine i would feel if i was in that situation.feel free to send requests

    ~lost soul~

    i walked around a lost soul alone and cold inside without him on my arm massive harm done to my heart im quickly falling apart  not able to think rationally moving around distractedly my mind not able to with-hold its capacity about to explode its always said to do what your told but what do i do when the voices in my head have a hold or worse yet complete control of my feelings and emotional killings filling my head with lies breaking emotional ties making the ones who love me seem to instead despise me making myself want to bleed eternally  till it runs dry because if hes not with me.... im ready to die.

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    1990lh commented on ~lost soul~

    05-04-2010

    very dark and loving emtion the feeling of lost. i enjoyed this. i too have a peom called lost soul if you would plz check it out.
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    Insideme commented on ~lost soul~

    04-11-2010

    The feel of him close, his everything is all you need sometimes. I feel ya sister.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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