Lost Love

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    Lost Love

    The last petal hit the ground
    When he withdrew his love
    And his heart
    The feeling of being apart
    Was to much to bare
    It was her dare
    To feel the icy cold water
    From the bottom she could see the light of the sun
    When her lungs gave out and was completely done
    She came back to this earth
    To get back
    What was taken away
    Till this day
    She haunts the life of her long lost love

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    dragonheart1 commented on Lost Love

    06-20-2009

    This is a great poem about a lost love but I don't know if i like the haunting part

    dahlusion commented on Lost Love

    05-15-2009

    Gorgeously Gothic!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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