Lonely as can be

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    Lonely as can be

     I'm as lonely as a flower
    When the day has gone away.
    Like a hermit-crab when strolling
    By itself in some old bay.

    The sun sets and the moon rises.
    Redness slowly turns to blue.
    Stars, by magic, they appear
    Hanging as if fixed with glue.

    And your bright, exquisite features
    Hop in mind, in such a scene.
    My heart breaks, and I start crying
    Cause alone, I've never been.

    Still amidst my breathless whinings
    No one came to check on me.
    Sorrow swiftly turns to maddness
    Cause none want, with me, to be.

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    Mogli commented on Lonely as can be

    06-18-2009

    I like your imagery a lot. I can feel how you feel. Good stuff brother.
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    largeclyde

    07/02/2009

    Thank you!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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