Lolly Pop

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    Lolly Pop
    Lolly pop, lolly pop,
    In the store,
    Mommy may I have one more,
    Molly, Molly you are so silly,
    You must save one for your sister Lillie,
    Lolly pop, lolly pop,
    In the store,
    I only wish to have one more.

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    MrGee commented on Lolly Pop

    12-03-2009

    I rose up early this morning and thought I would try something new. I clicked on "read these poems" and your poem caught my attention. I love the picture you have posted with this poem. The poem has excellent meter and brings a smile to my face. Also, the rhymn is well placed. I am adding this poem to my favorites. obviously this poem is a 10. I look forward to reading more of your work. I have a poem u may find interesting it is entitled Folly. Mrgee
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