LOCUST IN MY SOUL

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  • casp1
  • STAYING IN SPIRIT DESPITE THE MADNESS OF THE WORLD

LOCUST IN MY SOUL

A LINGERING SORROW CONTINUES TO STING LIKE LOCUST IN MY SOUL. EACH BITE LEAVING A HOLE, I'M UN-WHOLE, OUT OF CONTROL....BELOW...WHERE I BELONG....MY PAIN-BODY SINGS THIS WINTER SONG...ALONE AMONGST MANY, CALM WITH SHOULDERS HEAVY...EYES DEEP LIKE DEATH....EACH BLINK A LAST BREATH...

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lisagrizzly commented on LOCUST IN MY SOUL

12-29-2009

Wow this is a deep write. I can feel the strain, pain, and agony. Completely broken soul waiting to die. I too like using the ... in my poetry. It is like lingering thought into each physical action the body , heart and soul is going through. Thank you and Happy NEw Year.

casp1

12/29/2009

thank u 4 the feedback....happy holidays

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

casp1’s Poems (16)

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UNTITTLED 0
OBSCURUS 1:1 1
THE NIGHT THAT I DIED 2
WE ARE..... 0
LOCUST IN MY SOUL 1
VISITORS FROM THE PAST 0
W.G 0
SEPTEMBER STORM 0
A RECITAL 0
FEAR 1
THIS WINTER OF MINE 0
OBSCURUS 0
HURRICANE 1
R.A.W 2 0
THE AFTERMATH 0
TO HER... 0