Little Poodle

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    Little Poodle

    Little poodle so tiny as I, in the house of mine.
    Why is it, that your hair is so curly as mine.
    In this big world,
    Why are you s small....
    You look so lonely...
    Until I say,
    You are mine and I am yours.
    You begin to be happy and start to play.

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    Ray37342 commented on Little Poodle

    08-27-2009

    Nice. I really see nothing wrong here. To me though, it seems like it needs a little bit more added to it, I don't really know where, it starts off really good, but then just seems to drop us off. I did like, reminds me everyone and everything needs a friend in life. Thank you. All in all, I give this 8..
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    bettybop200741

    08/27/2009

    thank you for the comment, I take all the suggestion from everybody. I wrote this when I was in school years ago.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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