Limited

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    Limited

     I dont know what about you makes me smile

    I dont know why I wait for you everyday
    in denial
    that Im falling for you
    And I bet you can tell by the look in my eyes  that I cant stand being with or without you

    I'm crying out in every move that I make
    that I want you to hold me and say that you
    love me........
    for everyday we spend together is limited
    In this gated perimeter

    Well basically what I'm trying to say...........


    I love you in every single small way

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    Chaos128 commented on Limited

    07-15-2009

    You're words are very moving. I'm thinking you chose the small type to emulate talking in a small/shy voice. Only you know what works best for you, but if you love someone, it seems a shame not to let them know.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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