Life

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    Life

    Life is precious despite all your messes.
    People desgise themselves,u know men in dresses.
    Its the people that dont love you,they push and shove you.
    not to do better but to do worse.
    life to me sometimes is a curse
    how do you really feel about things
    which you had it all dimonds and rings
    were do you go when your sad
    me i have no mom no dad
    i really use to think life suck
    naw its my trade of bad luck
    i try my hardest to feel what i write
    know matter if it takes all night
    when people hurt you its real noticeable
    i try not to be so emotional though
    it hurts and bleeds but know i feel gud.
    haters they dont and wish they could
    i dont hurt others do gud unto them
    im not mean,evil nor trifaline
    ive succeeded in life and know im GREAT
    this all happens to thoughs who arnt FAKE

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    Phoenix9 commented on Life

    12-28-2008

    not bad but you need to check spelling

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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