Life..

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Life..

Life Is Crazy, One Day Your Happy Next Your Sad, Angry, And Mad Just Be Glad Were Here Today Cause In A Snap Of A Finger Were Gone, So Enjoy Life And Belive In Jesus Christ....

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Taz commented on Life..

03-09-2009

I like you and I are a like we we write what we think and fel you should check my work out

TDrakeTerry commented on Life..

02-19-2009

I like this poem a lot, but the little editor in me needs to point out a couple of things: "Your" needs to be you're, both "were"s should be we're, and "believe" needs an 'e'. The poet's only tool is the word, so be careful with them. (I minimize my typos by writing things in MS Word, then using copy and paste.)

LittleSitahSoul commented on Life..

12-11-2008

I like that.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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